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Shoot test - MP5SD

By Blu

October 15, 2008

 

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For the shooting exercise =]

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Critic's Grade: B

6 Reviews

Blu at 7:11 AM on October 18, 2008


You should compare the size of the shells to the thickness of the magazine. Thanks for the advice though :)

Foist at 1:54 AM on October 18, 2008


Nice work. The recoil is really nice and the gun looks like it is actually firing real rounds which takes a while to master. See, you think the shells in mine look too big but I think yours look to small :P. Anyway, the only thing I can see is that there isn't really much easing when he brings up the gun and it makes it seem a bit rigid. Also, if you add a bit of easing and tiny delay rotations of the gun it can add a sense of weight to the weapon. This is just my advice, either way nice job. :D

Chippo at 6:57 PM on October 15, 2008


nice...i like the sounds

Mr. Octagon at 6:13 PM on October 15, 2008


Hah I like the silenced approach...thats new!

StickZer0 at 4:30 PM on October 15, 2008


Love it, not so sure about that sound, but it all looks great and the little light on his face is great. Good work.

Sticktacular at 4:16 PM on October 15, 2008


Nice, i like it. I like the silenced muzzle flash, good work there.

The shells are a little weird to me. They seem light or something.

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Author:

Blu

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October 15, 2008

 

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544 Views

Rating:

3.11 / 5

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9 Votes

Critic's Grade:

B

 

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